I love the description used in this piece. Dee
The rain arrived, late, after the heat of the day had bled out and the evening breeze had sunk in deep. The sun had not set, but it had abandoned its strength, filling the last hours of the day with cool light. The air had smoothed and thinned, no longer dragging at lungs and skin […]
via Flash Fiction: Kiss (146 words) — apprentice, never master
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amazing imagery. I’m a junkie for good imagery.
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Amazing.
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Reaaaaallly like this!!
They say jealousy is a negative emotion, but when I writer reads another’s words and feel jealous that they didn’t get there first it’s a compliment.
I’m jealous.
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Hi Chris,
I hadn’t thought of that, but you’re right about the jealous writer. I had to repost it. It was so good.
Dee
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Hi Dee! I’m alwwwwwaaaaaays right! Apart from the many times that I’m so far from it that it’s a mere dot on the horizon!
Bless ya!
All the best to you and yours! X
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This is superb! I’ve taken a liking to flash fiction and have started a series on my blog.
What you have here is simply a gorgeous picture.
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